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Friday 2 December 2016

Reflection T4W8 Literacy

Literacy: This week for literacy we got to do Friday free choice writing I wrote about the two girls that left their house and a burglar came in when they went to see the fireworks . 
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Once upon a time there were two little girls called Lara &  Katelynn that lived with their Mum and Dad. One day their Mum and Dad went out for dinner and left the three girls alone. Once they had left there was a knock on the door.
The two  girls did not want to answer the door because they thought it was a robber. But they answered the door and they saw there Nana. But it was a robber in real life.When they knew it was a robber they locked the door and ran to see if somebody could help them.

But then they saw something so good they forgot all  about the house and went to see what it was. What they saw was… FIREWORKS! When they went there they saw their Mum and Dad. They ran over to tell them what had happened. They were a little bit mad but they said that they could stay and watch the fireworks. Then when they got home the robber should be gone and they could buy more things for the girls and for them.

When they got home the home was a mess from the robber so their Mum and Dad phoned the police. He said that there had been a robber in the house when they went to the  fireworks but they did not know that the robber was still in there house. The robber could hear everything that their Mum and Dad were saying so the robber got out of the house. He made a plan to kidnap the three girls so that they would never find the girls again. Then he did it and they were ever never seen again.Their mum and dad were crying their heart out with tears. But the robber was so sad that he kidnapped them so he brought them back. He said that he kidnapped the girls and then the police were going to put him in jail but they didn’t because he made up for his mistakes.
The End






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