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Friday 24 July 2015

                              
Wednesday 22th July

A long long time ago there lived a queen the queen .The queen  was sick and tired  of winter one day the queen went for a walk and smash her crown !!!!!crash!!!!! smash!!!!! then the diamond flow up into the sky and turn into seven stars when the queen looks up in the sky it reminds her to be kind and nice. THE END

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  1. Unknown5 August 2015 at 18:05

    Hi Lara
    I like this blog post and the picture. I think that you could work on your sentence because the second sentence does not make sense at the start. I like that you used the words Crash and Smash because it makes it sound interesting.
    Bye for Now
    Holly

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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